Personal Bio Feedback.

    Personal Bio is up as of a couple minutes ago. I'm planning on adding some images between text boxes eventually. For now, I welcome your feedback. Please feel free to tear into it.

    Before you go do that, though, I have a few questions for you to consider:

• Is my way of speaking too informal? I tried to be pretty informal and less dry, but if you think it isn’t fit for this kind of writing assignment, let me know so I can change it up.
• Is my first paragraph too ridiculous and over-the-top? I thought it sounded cool. It might be a bit too fiery, though.
• Does the structure of the page look alright to you?